Such a simÂple notion. EssenÂtial even. But Elliott’s advice is not limÂitÂed to the dogÂma of “show, don’t tell” (maybe a limÂitÂed way to think of writÂing). More pointÂedÂly he stressÂes the conÂnecÂtion of abstract ideas to conÂcrete, speÂcifÂic descripÂtions that anchor events to a realÂiÂty outÂside the author’s head, one the readÂer wants see, hear, touch, etc. The “best writÂing advice” Iyer ever received is a useÂful preÂcept espeÂcialÂly, I think, for peoÂple who write all of the time, and who need to be remindÂed, like Iyer, to keep it fresh. Read his full descripÂtion at The AmerÂiÂcan ScholÂar.
Jack KerÂouac wants you to turn writÂing into “free deviÂaÂtion (assoÂciÂaÂtion) of mind into limÂitÂless blow-on-subÂject seas of thought, swimÂming in sea of EngÂlish with no disÂciÂpline, othÂer than rhythms of rhetorÂiÂcal exhaÂlaÂtion and exposÂtuÂlatÂed stateÂment….” Think you can do that? Find out by folÂlowÂing Kerouac’s “EssenÂtials of SponÂtaÂneous Prose.” He pubÂlished this docÂuÂment in Black MounÂtain Review in 1957 and wrote it in response to a request from Allen GinsÂberg and William S. BurÂroughs that he explain his method for writÂing The SubÂterÂraneansin three days time.
And for a theÂoÂry of Kerouac’s not quite theÂoÂry, visÂit the site of MarisÂsa M. Juarez, proÂfesÂsor of Rhetoric, ComÂpoÂsiÂtion, and the TeachÂing of EngÂlish at the UniÂverÂsiÂty of AriÂzona. Juarez raisÂes some salient points about why Kerouac’s “EssenÂtials” bemuse the EngÂlish teacher: His method “disÂcourÂages reviÂsion… chasÂtisÂes gramÂmatÂiÂcal corÂrectÂness, and encourÂages writerÂly flexÂiÂbilÂiÂty.” Read Kerouac’s full “EssenÂtials of SponÂtaÂneous Prose” here or below. [Note: If you see what looks like typos, they are not errors. They are part of KerÂouac’s origÂiÂnal, sponÂtaÂneous text.]
SET-UP: The object is set before the mind, either in realÂiÂty. as in sketchÂing (before a landÂscape or teacup or old face) or is set in the memÂoÂry whereÂin it becomes the sketchÂing from memÂoÂry of a defÂiÂnite image-object.
PROCEDURE: Time being of the essence in the puriÂty of speech, sketchÂing lanÂguage is undisÂturbed flow from the mind of perÂsonÂal secret idea-words, blowÂing (as per jazz musiÂcian) on subÂject of image.
METHOD: No periÂods sepÂaÂratÂing senÂtence-strucÂtures already arbiÂtrarÂiÂly ridÂdled by false colons and timid usuÂalÂly needÂless comÂmas-but the vigÂorÂous space dash sepÂaÂratÂing rhetorÂiÂcal breathÂing (as jazz musiÂcian drawÂing breath between outÂblown phrasÂes)– “meaÂsured pausÂes which are the essenÂtials of
our speech”– “diviÂsions of the sounds we hear”- “time and how to note it down.” (William CarÂlos Williams)
SCOPING: Not “selecÂtivÂiÂty” of expresÂsion but folÂlowÂing free deviÂaÂtion (assoÂciÂaÂtion) of mind into limÂitÂless blow-on-subÂject seas of thought,
swimÂming in sea of EngÂlish with no disÂciÂpline othÂer than rhythms of rhetorÂiÂcal exhaÂlaÂtion and exposÂtuÂlatÂed stateÂment, like a fist comÂing down on a table with each comÂplete utterÂance, bang! (the space dash)- Blow as deep as you want-write as deeply, fish as far down as you want, satÂisÂfy yourÂself first, then readÂer canÂnot fail to receive teleÂpathÂic shock and meanÂing-exciteÂment by same laws operÂatÂing in his own human mind.
LAG IN PROCEDURE: No pause to think of propÂer word but the infanÂtile pileÂup of scatÂoÂlogÂiÂcal buildup words till satÂisÂfacÂtion is gained, which will turn out to be a great appendÂing rhythm to a thought and be in accorÂdance with Great Law of timÂing.
TIMING: NothÂing is mudÂdy that runs in time and to laws of time-ShakeÂspearÂiÂan stress of draÂmatÂic need to speak now in own unalÂterÂable way or forÂevÂer hold tongue-no reviÂsions (except obviÂous ratioÂnal misÂtakes, such as names or calÂcuÂlatÂed inserÂtions in act of not writÂing but insertÂing).
CENTER OF INTEREST: Begin not from preÂconÂceived idea of what to say about image but from jewÂel cenÂter of interÂest in subÂject of image at moment of writÂing, and write outÂwards swimÂming in sea of lanÂguage to periphÂerÂal release and exhausÂtion-Do not afterÂthink except for poetÂic or P. S. reaÂsons. NevÂer afterÂthink to “improve” or defray impresÂsions, as, the best writÂing is always the most painful perÂsonÂal wrung-out tossed from craÂdle warm proÂtecÂtive mind-tap from yourÂself the song of yourÂself, blow!-now!-your way is your only way- “good”-or “bad”-always honÂest (“ludi- crous”), sponÂtaÂneous, “conÂfesÂsionÂals’ interÂestÂing, because not “craftÂed.” Craft is craft.
STRUCTURE OF WORK: ModÂern bizarre strucÂtures (sciÂence ficÂtion, etc.) arise from lanÂguage being dead, “difÂferÂent” themes give illuÂsion of “new” life. FolÂlow roughÂly outÂlines in outÂfanÂning moveÂment over subÂject, as rivÂer rock, so mindÂflow over jewÂel-cenÂter need (run your mind over it, once) arrivÂing at pivÂot, where what was dim-formed “beginÂning” becomes sharp-necesÂsiÂtatÂing “endÂing” and lanÂguage shortÂens in race to wire of time-race of work, folÂlowÂing laws of Deep Form, to conÂcluÂsion, last words, last trickÂle-Night is The End.
MENTAL STATE: If posÂsiÂble write “withÂout conÂsciousÂness” in semi-trance (as Yeats’ latÂer “trance writÂing”) allowÂing subÂconÂscious to admit in own uninÂhibÂitÂed interÂestÂing necÂesÂsary and so “modÂern” lanÂguage what conÂscious art would cenÂsor, and write excitÂedÂly, swiftÂly, with writÂing-or-typÂingcramps, in accorÂdance (as from cenÂter to periphÂery) with laws of orgasm, Reich’s “becloudÂing of conÂsciousÂness.” Come from withÂin, out-to relaxed and said.
Oh, and for authenticity’s sake, you should try Kerouac’s “EssenÂtials” on a typeÂwriter. It’s all he had when he wrote The SubÂterÂraneans. No gramÂmar robots to disÂtract him.
Ricky GerÂvais, the creÂator of The Office, rarely gets out of his comÂic perÂsona. It’s usuÂalÂly laughs, schtick, and more laughs. But when Fast ComÂpaÂny pinned him down and asked him about “the sinÂgle biggest influÂence on his creÂative process,” he turned seriÂous (after a few more laughs) and talked about a forÂmaÂtive moment with a childÂhood EngÂlish teacher. The teacher taught him this: you’re betÂter off writÂing … NevÂer mind, I’ll let Ricky tell the tale. It’s his stoÂry after all.
Kierkegaard apparÂentÂly did his best writÂing standÂing up, as did Charles DickÂens, WinÂston Churchill, Vladimir Nabokov and VirÂginia Woolf. Also put Ernest HemÂingÂway in the standÂing desk club too.
In 1954, George PlimpÂton interÂviewed HemÂingÂway for the litÂerÂary jourÂnal he co-foundÂed the year before, The Paris Review. The interÂview came prefÂaced with a descripÂtion of the novÂelÂist’s writÂing stuÂdio in Cuba:
Ernest HemÂingÂway writes in the bedÂroom of his house in the Havana subÂurb of San FranÂcisÂco de Paula. He has a speÂcial workÂroom preÂpared for him in a square towÂer at the southÂwest corÂner of the house, but prefers to work in his bedÂroom, climbÂing to the towÂer room only when “charÂacÂters” driÂve him up there…
The room is dividÂed into two alcoves by a pair of chest-high bookÂcasÂes that stand out into the room at right angles from oppoÂsite walls.…
It is on the top of one of these clutÂtered bookcases—the one against the wall by the east winÂdow and three feet or so from his bed—that HemÂingÂway has his “work desk”—a square foot of cramped area hemmed in by books on one side and on the othÂer by a newsÂpaÂper-covÂered heap of papers, manÂuÂscripts, and pamÂphlets. There is just enough space left on top of the bookÂcase for a typeÂwriter, surÂmountÂed by a woodÂen readÂing board, five or six penÂcils, and a chunk of copÂper ore to weight down papers when the wind blows in from the east winÂdow.
A workÂing habit he has had from the beginÂning, HemÂingÂway stands when he writes. He stands in a pair of his overÂsized loafers on the worn skin of a lessÂer kudu—the typeÂwriter and the readÂing board chest-high oppoÂsite him.
PopÂuÂlar SciÂence, a magÂaÂzine with roots much oldÂer than the Paris Review, first began writÂing about the virtues of standÂing desks for writÂers back in 1883. By 1967, they were explainÂing how to fashÂion a desk with simÂple supÂplies instead of forkÂing over $800 for a comÂmerÂcial modÂel — a hefty sum in the 60s, let alone now. PlyÂwood, saw, hamÂmer, nails, glue, varÂnish — that’s all you need to build a DIY stand-up desk. Or, as Papa HemÂingÂway did, you could simÂply throw your writÂing machine on the nearÂest bookÂcase and get going. As for how to write the great AmerÂiÂcan novÂel, I’m not sure that PopÂuÂlar SciÂence offers much help. But maybe some advice from HemÂingÂway himÂself will steer you in the right direcÂtion. See SevÂen Tips From Ernest HemÂingÂway on How to Write FicÂtion.
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HenÂry Louis MenckÂen (1880–1956) was a famous AmerÂiÂcan jourÂnalÂist, essayÂist, critÂic of AmerÂiÂcan life and culÂture, and a scholÂar of AmerÂiÂcan EngÂlish. An expert in so many fields, he was called “the BalÂtiÂmore Sage.” At the age of 22, MenckÂen became manÂagÂing ediÂtor of the MornÂing HerÂald in his homeÂtown of BalÂtiÂmore. But it was not only through his work as a jourÂnalÂist that he was “as famous in AmerÂiÂca as George Bernard Shaw was in EngÂland.” The influÂenÂtial litÂerÂary critÂic helped launch the SouthÂern and Harlem litÂerÂary renaisÂsances. With his litÂerÂary jourÂnal The Smart Set, MenckÂen paved the way for writÂers such as F. Scott FitzgerÂald, Eugene O’Neill, SinÂclair Lewis, Theodore DreisÂer, and James Joyce. He also wrote sevÂerÂal books, most notably his monÂuÂmenÂtal study The AmerÂiÂcan LanÂguage.
“The two main ideas that run through all of my writÂing, whether it be litÂerÂary critÂiÂcism or politÂiÂcal polemic are these: I am strong in favor of libÂerÂty and I hate fraud.” (source) His spirÂitÂed defense of the freeÂdom of speech and of the press almost landÂed him in jail when he fought against the banÂning of his secÂond litÂerÂary jourÂnal, The AmerÂiÂcan MerÂcury.
This interÂview above was conÂductÂed by MenckÂen’s colÂleague DonÂald Howe Kirkley of The BalÂtiÂmore Sun in a small recordÂing room at the Library of ConÂgress in WashÂingÂton on June 30, 1948. It gives you a rare chance to hear his voice.
By proÂfesÂsion, Matthias RaschÂer teachÂes EngÂlish and HisÂtoÂry at a High School in northÂern Bavaria, GerÂmany. In his free time he scours the web for good links and posts the best finds on TwitÂter.
Many, if not, most writÂers teach—whether litÂerÂaÂture, comÂpoÂsiÂtion, or creÂative writing—and examÂinÂing what those writÂers teach is an espeÂcialÂly interÂestÂing exerÂcise because it gives us insight not only into what they read, but also what they read closeÂly and careÂfulÂly, again and again, in order to inform their own work and demonÂstrate the craft as they know it to stuÂdents. Let’s take two case studÂies: exemÂplars of conÂtemÂpoÂrary litÂerÂary ficÂtion, both of whom teach at ColumÂbia UniÂverÂsiÂty. I’ll leave it to you to draw your own conÂcluÂsions about what their sylÂlabi show us about their process.
First up, we have Zadie Smith, author of White Teeth and, most recentÂly, NW: A NovÂel. In 2009, Smith lent her litÂerÂary senÂsiÂbilÂiÂties to the teachÂing of a weekÂly ficÂtion semÂiÂnar called “Sense and SenÂsiÂbilÂiÂty,” for which we have the full bookÂlist of 15 titles she assigned to stuÂdents. See the list below and make of it what you will:
Brief InterÂviews with Hideous Men, David FosÂter WalÂlace Catholics, BriÂan Moore The ComÂplete StoÂries, Franz KafÂka Crash, J.G. BalÂlard An ExperÂiÂment in Love, Hilary ManÂtel ModÂern CritÂiÂcism and TheÂoÂry: A ReadÂer, David Lodge The ScrewÂtape LetÂters, C.S. Lewis My Loose Thread, DenÂnis CoopÂer The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie, Muriel Spark The LosÂer, Thomas BernÂhard The Book of Daniel, E.L. DocÂtorow A Room with a View, E.M. Forster ReadÂer’s Block, David MarkÂson Pnin, Vladimir Nabokov The QuiÂet AmerÂiÂcan, GraÂham Greene
Smith’s list trends someÂwhat surÂprisÂingÂly white male. She includes not a few “writer’s writers”—Kafka, J.G. BalÂlard, and of course, Nabokov, who also turns up as a favorite for anothÂer RussÂian expat writer and author of AbsurÂdisÂtan, Gary ShteynÂgart. In a Barnes and Noble author proÂfile, ShteynÂgart lists two of Nabokov’s books—Pnin and LoliÂta—among his ten all-time favorites. Also on his list are Saul Bellow’s HerÂzog and Philip Roth’s Portnoy’s ComÂplaint. All three authors appear in a 2013 ColumÂbia course ShteynÂgart teachÂes called “The HysÂterÂiÂcal Male,” a class specifÂiÂcalÂly designed, it seems, to examÂine the neuÂroÂsis of the white (or JewÂish) male writer. With charÂacÂterÂisÂtic dark humor, he describes his course thus:
The 20th CenÂtuÂry has been a comÂplete disÂasÂter and the 21st cenÂtuÂry will likeÂly be even worse. In response to the hopeÂlessÂness of the human conÂdiÂtion in genÂerÂal, and the prospects for the North AmerÂiÂcan and British male in parÂticÂuÂlar, the conÂtemÂpoÂrary male novÂelÂist has been howlÂing angriÂly for quite some time. This course will examÂine some of the results, from Roth’s PortÂnoy and Bellow’s HerÂzog to MarÂtin Amis’s John Self, takÂing side trips into the unreÂliÂable insanÂiÂty of Nabokov’s Charles KinÂbote, the mudÂdled senilÂiÂty of MordeÂcai Richler’s BarÂney PanofÂsky and the someÂwhat quiÂeter desÂperÂaÂtion of David Gates’s JerniÂgan. We will examÂine the strateÂgies behind first-perÂson hysÂteÂria and conÂtrast with the alterÂnate third- and first-perÂson meshugas of Bruce Wagner’s I’ll Let You Go. What gives vitalÂiÂty to the male hysÂterÂiÂcal hero? How should humor be balÂanced with pathos? Why are so many proÂtagÂoÂnists (and authors) of JewÂish or Anglo extracÂtion? How have earÂly male hysÂterÂics givÂen rise to the “hysÂterÂiÂcal realÂism” as outÂlined by critÂic James Wood? Is the shoutÂing, sweaty male the perÂfect repÂreÂsenÂtaÂtion of our disÂasÂtrous times, or is a dose of sane introÂspecÂtion needÂed to make sense of the world around us? How does the change from earÂly to late hysÂterÂiÂcal novÂels reflect our progress from an entireÂly male-domÂiÂnatÂed world to a mostÂly male-domÂiÂnatÂed one? Do we still need to be readÂing this stuff?
I would hazÂard to guess that ShteynÂgart’s answer to the last quesÂtion is “yes.”
Note: Elmore Leonard, the crime writer who gave us Get Shorty, Freaky Deaky, and Glitz, died at his home in BloomÂfield VilÂlage, MichiÂgan. He was 87. If you nevÂer had a chance to read Leonard, you can start with “Ice Man,” a 2012 stoÂry that appeared in The Atlantic. It’s free online. You can also get a feel for his writÂing by revisÂitÂing a post writÂten here by Mike Springer last year. It gives an overview of Leonard’s tips for aspirÂing writÂers. And, in so doing, it proÂvides valuÂable insight into how Leonard approached his craft. Elmore Leonard’s UltiÂmate Guide for Would-Be WritÂers is reprintÂed in full below.
“If it sounds like writÂing,” says Elmore Leonard, “I rewrite it.”
Leonard’s writÂing sounds the way peoÂple talk. It rings true. In novÂels like Get Shorty, Rum Punch and Out of Sight, Leonard has estabÂlished himÂself as a masÂter stylÂist, and while his charÂacÂters may be lowlifes, his books are received and admired in the highÂest cirÂcles. In 1998 MarÂtin Amis recalled visÂitÂing Saul BelÂlow and seeÂing Leonard’s books on the old man’s shelves. “BelÂlow and I agreed,” said Amis, “that for an absoluteÂly reliÂable and unstintÂing infuÂsion of narÂraÂtive pleaÂsure in a prose miracÂuÂlousÂly purged of all false qualÂiÂties, there was no one quite like Elmore Leonard.”
In 2006 Leonard appeared on BBC Two’s The CulÂture Show to talk about the craft of writÂing and give some advice to aspirÂing authors. In the proÂgram, shown above, Leonard talks about his deep appreÂciÂaÂtion of Ernest HemÂingÂway’s work in genÂerÂal, and about his parÂticÂuÂlar debt to the 1970 crime novÂel The Friends of Eddie Coyle, by George V. HigÂgins. While explainÂing his approach, Leonard jots down three tips:
“You have to lisÂten to your charÂacÂters.”
“Don’t worÂry about what your mothÂer thinks of your lanÂguage.”
“Try to get a rhythm.”
“I always refer to style as sound,” says Leonard. “The sound of the writÂing.” Some of Leonard’s sugÂgesÂtions appeared in a 2001 New York Times artiÂcle that became the basis of his 2007 book, Elmore Leonard’s 10 Rules of WritÂing. Here are those rules in outÂline form:
You can read more from Leonard on his rules in the 2001 Times artiÂcle. And you can read his new short stoÂry, “Ice Man,” in The Atlantic.
The way peoÂple read on the interÂnet has encourÂaged the proÂviÂsion of “tips,” espeÂcialÂly preÂsentÂed as short senÂtences colÂlectÂed in lists. While we here at Open CulÂture selÂdom ride that curÂrent, we make excepÂtions for lists of tips by authors best known for their long-form texÂtuÂal achieveÂments. Richard Ford (The SportsÂwriter books), Jonathan Franzen (The CorÂrecÂtions and FreeÂdom), and Anne Enright (The Portable VirÂgin, The GathÂerÂing) here offer ten sugÂgesÂtions each to guide your own writÂing habits. Though preÂsumÂably learned in the process of writÂing novÂels, many of these lessons apply just as well to othÂer forms. I, for examÂple, write mostÂly essays, but still find great valÂue in Franzen’s instrucÂtion to treat the readÂer as a friend, Enright’s point that descripÂtion conÂveys opinÂion, and Ford’s injuncÂtion not to write reviews (or at least, as I read it, not reviews as so narÂrowÂly defined).
Some of these tips have to do with techÂnique: Ford advisÂes against drinkÂing while writÂing, Franzen advisÂes against using “then” as a conÂjuncÂtion, and Enright advisÂes you simÂply to keep putting words on the page. OthÂers have more to do with mainÂtainÂing a cerÂtain temÂperaÂment: “Don’t have arguÂments with your wife in the mornÂing, or late at night,” says Ford; “You have to love before you can be relentÂless,” says Franzen; “Have fun,” says Enright. And as any sucÂcessÂful writer knows, you can’t pull it off at all withÂout a strong dose of pracÂtiÂcalÂiÂty, as exemÂpliÂfied by Enright’s “Try to be accuÂrate about stuff,” Franzen’s doubt that “anyÂone with an interÂnet conÂnecÂtion at his workÂplace is writÂing good ficÂtion,” and Ford’s “Don’t have chilÂdren.” Can we draw out an overÂarÂchÂing guideÂline? Avoid disÂtracÂtion, perÂhaps. But you realÂly have to read these authors’ lists in full, like you would their novÂels, to grasp them. The lists below origÂiÂnalÂly appeared in The Guardian, along with tips from varÂiÂous othÂer esteemed writÂers.
Richard Ford
1 MarÂry someÂbody you love and who thinks you being a writer’s a good idea.
5 Don’t have arguÂments with your wife in the mornÂing, or late at night.
6 Don’t drink and write at the same time.
7 Don’t write letÂters to the ediÂtor. (No one cares.)
8 Don’t wish ill on your colÂleagues.
9 Try to think of othÂers’ good luck as encourÂageÂment to yourÂself.
10 Don’t take any shit if you can ÂposÂsiÂbly help it.
Jonathan Franzen
1 The readÂer is a friend, not an adverÂsary, not a specÂtaÂtor.
2 FicÂtion that isn’t an author’s perÂsonÂal advenÂture into the frightÂenÂing or the unknown isn’t worth writÂing for anyÂthing but monÂey.
3 NevÂer use the word “then” as a ÂconÂjuncÂtion – we have “and” for this purÂpose. SubÂstiÂtutÂing “then” is the lazy or tone-deaf writer’s non-soluÂtion to the probÂlem of too many “ands” on the page.
4 Write in the third perÂson unless a ÂrealÂly disÂtincÂtive first-perÂson voice Âoffers itself irreÂsistibly.
5 When inforÂmaÂtion becomes free and uniÂverÂsalÂly accesÂsiÂble, voluÂmiÂnous research for a novÂel is devalÂued along with it.
6 The most pureÂly autoÂbiÂoÂgraphÂiÂcal ÂficÂtion requires pure invenÂtion. Nobody ever wrote a more autoÂbiographical stoÂry than “The MetaÂmorphosis”.
7 You see more sitÂting still than chasÂing after.
8 It’s doubtÂful that anyÂone with an interÂnet conÂnecÂtion at his workÂplace is writÂing good ficÂtion.
9 InterÂestÂing verbs are selÂdom very interÂestÂing.
10 You have to love before you can be relentÂless.
Anne Enright
1 The first 12 years are the worst.
2 The way to write a book is to actuÂalÂly write a book. A pen is useÂful, typÂing is also good. Keep putting words on the page.
3 Only bad writÂers think that their work is realÂly good.
4 DescripÂtion is hard. RememÂber that all descripÂtion is an opinÂion about the world. Find a place to stand.
5 Write whatÂevÂer way you like. FicÂtion is made of words on a page; realÂiÂty is made of someÂthing else. It doesÂn’t matÂter how “real” your stoÂry is, or how “made up”: what matÂters is its necesÂsiÂty.
6 Try to be accuÂrate about stuff.
7 ImagÂine that you are dying. If you had a terÂmiÂnal disÂease would you ÂfinÂish this book? Why not? The thing that annoys this 10-weeks-to-live self is the thing that is wrong with the book. So change it. Stop arguÂing with yourÂself. Change it. See? Easy. And no one had to die.
8 You can also do all that with whiskey.
9 Have fun.
10 RememÂber, if you sit at your desk for 15 or 20 years, every day, not ÂcountÂing weekÂends, it changes you. It just does. It may not improve your temÂper, but it fixÂes someÂthing else. It makes you more free.
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