Here in the twenÂty-twenÂties, a hopeÂful young novÂelÂist might choose to enroll in one of a host of post-gradÂuÂate proÂgrams, and — with luck — there find a willÂing and able menÂtor. Back in the nineÂteen-thirÂties, things worked a bit difÂferÂentÂly. “In the spring of 1934, an aspirÂing writer named Arnold SamuelÂson hitchÂhiked from MinÂnesoÂta to FloriÂda to see if he could land a meetÂing with his favorite author,” says Nicole Bianchi, narÂraÂtor of the InkWell Media video above. “The writer he had picked to be his menÂtor? Ernest HemÂingÂway.”
What HemÂingÂway offered SamuelÂson was someÂthing more than a litÂerÂary menÂtorÂship. “This young man had one othÂer obsesÂsion,” HemÂingÂway writes in a 1935 Esquire piece. “He had always wantÂed to go to sea.” And so “we gave him a job as a night watchÂman on the boat which furÂnished him a place to sleep and work and gave him two or three hours’ work each day at cleanÂing up and a half of each day free to do his writÂing.” To HemÂingÂway’s irriÂtaÂtion, SamuelÂson proved not just a clumÂsy hand on the Pilar, but a fount of quesÂtions about how to craft litÂerÂaÂture — someÂthing HemÂingÂway gives the impresÂsion of conÂsidÂerÂing easÂiÂer done than said.
NevÂerÂtheÂless, in the Esquire piece, HemÂingÂway conÂdensÂes this long back-and-forth with SamuelÂson into a diaÂlogue conÂtainÂing lessons that “would have been worth fifty cents to him when he was twenÂty-one.” He first declares that “good writÂing is true writÂing,” and that such truth depends on the writer’s conÂsciÂenÂtiousÂness and knowlÂedge of life. As for the valÂue of imagÂiÂnaÂtion, “the more he learns from expeÂriÂence the more truÂly he can imagÂine.” But even the most world-weary novÂelÂist must “conÂvey everyÂthing, every senÂsaÂtion, sight, feelÂing, place and emoÂtion to the readÂer,” and that requires round after round of reviÂsion, so you might as well do the first draft in penÂcil.
As far as the writÂing itself, HemÂingÂway recÂomÂmends readÂing over at least your last two or three chapÂters at the start of each day, and repeats his well-known dicÂtum always to leave a litÂtle water in the well at the end so that “your subÂconÂscious will work on it all the time.” But all will be for naught if you haven’t read enough great books so as to “write what hasÂn’t been writÂten before or beat dead men at what they have done.” Don’t comÂpete with livÂing writÂers, whom HemÂingÂway saw as propped up by “critÂics who always need a genius of the seaÂson, someÂone they underÂstand comÂpleteÂly and feel safe in praisÂing, but when these fabÂriÂcatÂed geniusÂes are dead they will not exist.”
The video focusÂes on a series of menÂtal exerÂcisÂes HemÂingÂway explains to SamuelÂson. Recall an excitÂing expeÂriÂence, such as that of catchÂing a fish, and “find what gave you the emoÂtion, what the action was that gave you the exciteÂment. Then write it down makÂing it clear so the readÂer will see it too and have the same feelÂing you had.” RememÂber conÂflicts and try to underÂstand all the points of view: “If I bawl you out try to figÂure out what I’m thinkÂing about as well as how you feel about it. If CarÂlos cursÂes Juan think what both their sides of it are. Don’t just think who is right.” When othÂer peoÂple talk, “lisÂten comÂpleteÂly. Don’t be thinkÂing what you’re going to say.”
UnderÂlyÂing this charÂacÂterÂisÂtiÂcalÂly straightÂforÂward advice is the comÂmandÂment to find ways out of your own head and into the perÂspecÂtive of the rest of humanÂiÂty. The necÂesÂsary habits of obserÂvaÂtion can be culÂtiÂvatÂed anyÂwhere: at sea, yes, but also in the city, where you can “stand outÂside the theÂatre and see how peoÂple difÂfer in the way they get out of taxis or motor cars.” In the event, SamuelÂson nevÂer did become a novÂelÂist, though he did write a memÂoir about his year under HemÂingÂway’s tuteÂlage. WhatÂevÂer the expeÂriÂence taught SamuelÂson, it brought HemÂingÂway to a resÂoÂluÂtion of his own: “If any more aspiÂrant writÂers come on board the Pilar let them be females, let them be very beauÂtiÂful and let them bring chamÂpagne.”
RelatÂed conÂtent:
7 Tips From Ernest HemÂingÂway on How to Write FicÂtion
Ernest HemÂingÂway CreÂates a ReadÂing List for a Young Writer (1934)
Based in Seoul, ColÂin Marshall writes and broadÂcasts on cities, lanÂguage, and culÂture. His projects include the SubÂstack newsletÂter Books on Cities, the book The StateÂless City: a Walk through 21st-CenÂtuÂry Los AngeÂles and the video series The City in CinÂeÂma. FolÂlow him on TwitÂter at @colinmarshall or on FaceÂbook.