Beloved of 80s MFA stuÂdents and New YorkÂer ficÂtion ediÂtors, RayÂmond CarvÂer belonged to neiÂther world. He sufÂfered and drank his way from workÂing-class obscuÂriÂty to litÂerÂary fame like anothÂer underÂdog poet and writer, Charles BukowsÂki (though BukowsÂki nevÂer had, and maybe nevÂer wantÂed, Carver’s cachet). CarvÂer pubÂlished his first colÂlecÂtion of gritÂty realÂist stoÂries—Will You Please Be QuiÂet, Please?—in 1976, when short ficÂtion was largeÂly domÂiÂnatÂed by the baroque experÂiÂmenÂtalÂism of writÂers like DonÂald Barthelme and John Barth.
But while CarvÂer perÂhaps lacked the imagÂiÂnaÂtive exuÂberÂance, and earÂly eduÂcaÂtionÂal opporÂtuÂniÂties, of a Barthelme, his ficÂtion gave readÂers someÂthing they craved, maybe withÂout even knowÂing it. A Publisher’s WeekÂly reviewÂer of the first colÂlecÂtion notÂed that CarvÂer voiced the “inarÂticÂuÂlate worlds of AmerÂiÂcans,” the dim ache in the nonÂdeÂscript lives of aspirÂing stuÂdents, down-and-outÂers, dinÂer waitÂressÂes, salesÂmen, and unhapÂpiÂly hitched blue-colÂlar couÂples. Carver’s approach to quiÂet desÂperÂaÂtion is poetÂic, eschewÂing flashy postÂmodÂernist conÂtrapÂtions for powÂerÂfulÂly direct and evocaÂtive images. As writer and critÂic BriÂan A. Oard puts it:
The Carveresque image allows the readÂer to glimpse the terÂriÂble waste of his charÂacÂters’ lives (someÂthing the charÂacÂters themÂselves can someÂtimes feel but rarely see) and forces the readÂer to reconÂsidÂer the entire stoÂry in the image’s dark light.
In the audio at the top, you can hear Carver’s friend, writer Richard Ford, read “The Student’s Wife,” from Will You Please Be QuiÂet Please?, as part of The Guardian’s short stoÂry podÂcast. Ford describes the stoÂry as “spare, direct, rarely polyÂsylÂlabÂic, restrained, intense, nevÂer meloÂdraÂmatÂic, and real-soundÂing while being obviÂousÂly litÂerÂary in intent.”
“Fat,” anothÂer of Carver’s stoÂries from his first colÂlecÂtion, conÂflates two archeÂtypÂiÂcal images of disÂquiÂet in the AmerÂiÂcan psyÂche: obeÂsiÂty and bad marÂiÂtal sex. In a stoÂry about excess and longÂing, Carver’s minÂiÂmalÂist restraint lends these comÂmonÂplaces near-totemic staÂtus. Above, lisÂten to the stoÂry read by Irish author and memÂoirist Anne Enright.
CarvÂer, a man of self-destrucÂtive appetites, underÂstood the cravÂing of charÂacÂters like Rita, the waitÂress in “Fat.” His own desires drove an alcoÂholism that nearÂly killed him. SevÂerÂal of his charÂacÂters share this flaw, includÂing Wes in Carver’s stoÂry “Chef’s House,” read above by celÂeÂbratÂed short stoÂry-ist David Means. PubÂlished in The New YorkÂer in 1981, “Chef’s House” marks the beginÂning of Carver’s long relaÂtionÂship with the tony magÂaÂzine.
In 2007, The New YorkÂer also broke open the myth of the hyper-minÂiÂmalÂist CarvÂer, inspiÂraÂtion to thouÂsands of creÂative writÂing stuÂdents, by showÂing how his streamÂlined prose was perÂhaps as much the prodÂuct of Alfred A. Knopf ediÂtor GorÂdon Lish as of the author. The magÂaÂzine pubÂlished Lish’s edit of Carver’s “BeginÂners,” which became in Lish’s hands the sigÂnaÂture stoÂry “What We Talk About When We Talk About Love.”
I do not think lovers of CarvÂer need be too disÂmayed by these revÂeÂlaÂtions. SevÂerÂal well-known works of litÂerÂaÂture are close colÂlabÂoÂraÂtive efforts between ediÂtor and author. See, for examÂple, T.S. Eliot’s The Waste Land, which we’d nevÂer know by that name withÂout Ezra Pound (the famous footÂnotes were not Eliot’s idea either). And the glitÂterÂing senÂtences of FitzgerÂald would not shine so brightÂly withÂout ediÂtor MalÂcolm CowÂley. But as The New YorkÂer alleges, CarvÂer felt forced to accept Lish’s edits. Once he had gained more conÂfiÂdence and sucÂcess, his prose took on much more expanÂsive qualÂiÂties, as you can see in the 1983 stoÂry “CatheÂdral.”
The readÂings above can be othÂerÂwise found in our colÂlecÂtion of Free Audio Books.
RelatÂed ConÂtent:
Kurt Vonnegut’s Eight Tips on How to Write a Good Short StoÂry
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Josh Jones is a writer, ediÂtor, and musiÂcian based in WashÂingÂton, DC. FolÂlow him @jdmagness
CarvÂer did eschew the post modÂernism of the day but to my mind he strictÂly applied the HemÂingÂway proÂtoÂcol to “write what you know” and “to use simÂple lanÂguage that everyÂone uses.” This does not diminÂish his valÂue as an artist: thank goodÂness someÂone was doing it! I loved his short stoÂries as a teen and often find them comÂing to mind. His title What We Talk About When We Talk About Love seems to be some kind of meme — a now familÂiar conÂstrucÂtion applied to varÂiÂous subÂjects besides love.
The audio will not work for me… what is the forÂmat?
I could only hear the audio when using InterÂnet ExplorÂer. No sound at all in Safari or in FireÂfox.